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I had written this last year for one of the contest held at :iconsharpenededge: but back then I didn't like it well enough to see it worthy of being submitted after all I had penned it down as a rough draft all the while doodling with the words and all, lol.

And now so many months later, I had the chance to read it again and quite liked it. And hence I am posting it now, mainly because I have always been a bit too shy to share and post my writings. There are just a handful of people here who knows that I am a writer as well, before I ventured into the manipulation stream I used to write but it was always kept a private affair.....you see I am not confident about my writing skills.So Very Shy. 

So anyone with good knowledge about poetry and stuffs like that, I would love to hear a constructive criticism about this poem, which in my opinion seems to be very flat and plainly written.

Thank you for taking your time reading it, your views, comments, opinions and faves are greatly appreciated.❤️❤️ 

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I am not a writer....and I am terrible even with simple grammar rules.....although in my opinion I can at least "feel" the sincerity through art..and that feelings for me make DA be a place so special...for make us be connected with feelings we always hide...so deep inside.....

.....even if I feel I don't have the right to be here anymore.....and what I write looks most time just selfish words....I have that "need" to write someting...even if never will be good enough....or never will show exactly what I feel.....

...talking about your poetry I relate even with what you wrote in your description....if you don't want to show your feelings sharing your poetries....I am sure people will respect and understand that....the sincerity in your poetry make it be special for sure..and personal of course..

Some of your digital arts (Photomanipulation) or that poetry looks so special exactly for the feelings we can feel through it......and that connection will be always the same.....doesn't matter the kind of art you decide to put all things you hide deep inside your heart and soul....

Poetries....drawings....digital arts and all kind of arts that we do when we are in pain or trying to understand better ourselves...our feelings.........for me looks like the most precious arts in the world....the kind of rare treasure I most respect and I have found so much here in DA....

You say have always been a bit too shy to share and post your writings.........but you have been sharing your feelings through your art a long time ago here....and for sure would be lovely for your Followers have the honour to read your writings....if you wish to share it here of course...

you have a simple way to write.....and in the same way looks elegant and full of deep feelings...and I relate a lot with the sad meaning I have reading it....

thank you for share that poetry here....and keep in mind everything you do with your feelings never will be better or worst than others....but will be a part of you....and when we have so much going on in our hearts and mind...what you have to write will be always unique and interesting to read for sure....

the romantics will never feel their words good enough to be
pronounced or written.....not only for don't be confident...too shy.......we are most time so flooded with feelings......that we can't accept anything we do will be able to be good enough to describe something so complex we face all days....being so tender and special.....but make us crying in pain most time....

sorry for the long and selfish post...in my way I am just trying to say what you wrote and what you write looks special....and for you don't feel confident to post it....make it be even more special....when talented people like you don't feel confident to post a pretty poetry like that...show how much feelings it has....and how much about you we can feel in it....